标题: Electric blanket on the lonesome bed [打印本页] 作者: starpearlv 时间: 2007-9-5 22:56 标题: Electric blanket on the lonesome bed Cold winter in Wellington start spread
Dizzy rain drop, strong wind rolling across moisture earth
Lamps in night top of hill out of window like twinkling stars
Memories back the moments with beloved aside dreaming for shinning future
Feeling from souls always good
Darkness night single electric blanket on bed
Missing his hugged, wider arms that make heart warm mostly tears
Pacific oceanic widest border among us with sky full of stars
Sealed lonely feeling release him from pain for loving me in this nature
Trusting in hearts so close and good
For only ever truly love always feel how he feels
Lonesome me with little sadness作者: 结庐者 时间: 2007-9-5 23:03
英语韵脚略嫌随便。作者: starpearlv 时间: 2007-9-5 23:42
::: 在 结庐者 的贴子提到 :::
英语韵脚略嫌随便。
谢谢评论, 会继续努力!作者: 残花飞雨 时间: 2007-9-6 08:25
流行?作者: 风叶凛然 时间: 2007-9-6 08:57
晕晕作者: 天山苍鹰 时间: 2007-9-6 09:23
Lamps in night top of hill out of window like twinkling stars
楼主有没有觉得这里少了点东西作者: 才尽更断笔 时间: 2007-9-6 10:41
无韵。作者: 贾小妹 时间: 2007-9-6 22:18
都不帮翻一下呀？
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