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标题: 浣溪沙---------中秋思佳人 [打印本页]

作者: 月满霜天 时间: 2006-10-10 18:55
标题: 浣溪沙---------中秋思佳人

美人如花笑云端，恼恨青鸟不传言．江南思客问婵娟．从此清辉逐夜减，为谁辛苦为谁圆？又是一夜不成眠．

作者: 才尽更断笔 时间: 2006-10-10 19:11
略有出律。

作者: 月满霜天 时间: 2006-10-10 19:25
词的格律好难的~~要想写的好,又要不出律~~~唉!!!!!

作者: 才尽更断笔 时间: 2006-10-10 19:58
呵呵，难中求精，也是一种乐趣啊！

作者: 月满霜天 时间: 2006-10-10 20:07
难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那难那

作者: amonk 时间: 2006-10-10 22:54
太夸张了吧----------------------------

作者: amonk 时间: 2006-10-10 22:55

::: 在月满霜天的贴子提到 :::
从此清辉逐夜减

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